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 Posted On: 06/27/2011  At: 6:22:39 PM

http://vampirerazer.smackjeeves.com/ I would love the hear what you guys think <3


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 Posted On: 06/27/2011  At: 10:56:51 PM | Reply Link

The artwork is coming along nicely, though the action is a bit difficult to follow. In the third strips last panel there is some fine print type that is nearly impossible to read without magnification, and then once magnified it still could be difficult for some. A note on page layout, move the ad and the comic above the title, time and rating info.


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 Posted On: 06/28/2011  At: 12:08:02 AM | Reply Link

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The artwork is coming along nicely, though the action is a bit difficult to follow. In the third strips last panel there is some fine print type that is nearly impossible to read without magnification, and then once magnified it still could be difficult for some. A note on page layout, move the ad and the comic above the title, time and rating info.



hey thanks for the tips in the third one I was going for the small extra thoughts a character normally says in a manga they are not a major part of the story but just an extra thought but I will try to make it bigger :3 my friend is helping with the layout but I dont know smackjeeves restraints if any yet but again thanks so much for the info on page layout



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Your art is showing improvement. Keep it up


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